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Life On a String
Contributed by
Theo_stretner
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:44:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The buzzing in my ears,
Its driving me crazy,
Ive been counting down the years
All my dreams a becoming hazey,
All I see is your face,
As you stare me down,
As you put me in my place,
All i hear is the echoing sound,
You sit me on the ground,
So I can not hear a thing,
My heart begins to pound,
My life is on a string.
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2004-06-09 15:44:20]
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Re: Life On a String
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:47:22 PM AEST
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| Too me it sounds like a near death experience poem. But that's just me. Good job :) |
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