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I'll always remember
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 04:05:18 PM in AEST
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We were sitting there talking
He said something
I started to laugh
Time was going by to fast
And day was turning into night.
I needed to get home
But I didn't want to leave.
Here with him
Was were I wanted to be.
But he knew it was time for me to go
And he did not want to cause trouble
So we began to walk
And as we walked he took me by the hand.
I was so happy
But it all ended to soon.
We got to where I needed to go
And it was time to say good-bye.
I said bye
And he said it back
He huged me
I never wanted him to let go.
It was over
And I began to walk away
And as I did he grabbed me by the hand
He turned me around
And that's when it happened
He kissed me.
I felt my heart beat increase.
This was the happiest day of my life.
A day I will remember forever more.
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Re: I'll always remember
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by positivelypurple on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:27:55 AM AEST
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A beautiful write! I can see the smiles on your faces!!
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Re: I'll always remember
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:22:19 AM AEST
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I loved your poem. I cryed. I felt what you felt. My first kiss was as wonderfuly magical as it was to you. love you
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Re: I'll always remember
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:29:40 PM AEST
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I just want everybody who reads this poem to know that the comment that was left by my name was not me. Someone else got on my name so they could read my poems and they left a comment. I just wanted everyone to know that. Thank you.
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