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snow
Contributed by
hannahbanana
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:31:21 PM in AEST
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snow
mmm...mmm...mmm
i like snow
yum yum
in my tum
ice cold inside
frozen organs
frozen love
all day
all night
i will build
my perfect snowman
then when all is quiet and still
i will
by the raging fire
watch him melt
and flow away
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2004-06-09 17:31:21]
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Re: snow
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:36:01 PM AEST
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| That yum yum line made me think of snow cones :-D hehe. |
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Re: snow
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:06:16 PM AEST
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| Sad...melting him away.. oh ok not deliberate,,yet,,that the fun of your poem ...it starts to talk...just great |
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