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~ Can't Anymore ~
Contributed by
evilfairy
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im so confused today
Feels like Ive lost my way
Im alone here in this sea
There is no land round me
And I need you
I cant feel you
Anymore
Ive got no words to say
Try to hold my tears at bay
Thought real hard and dont know
Why it is you had to go
Trying to break free
Cause I cant breathe
Anymore
Dont look now my sky is gray
Want to stay in this bed all day
Broken pieces of my life collect
At my battered feet Ill leave it
And I want to see you
Cause I cant see you
Anymore
My limbs are heaving like they are clay
Wish all these feelings would go away
I can remember every word we said
Theyre all swimming round in my head
Inside Im dying
And Im not flying
Anymore
MW 09.06.4
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Re: ~ Can't Anymore ~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:30:55 PM AEST
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I liked your format - sometimes I think the "ay" sound is over used, but you managed it nicely in arrangement.
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Re: ~ Can't Anymore ~
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:29:43 AM AEST
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Good work!
I enjoyed reading it.
Greetz,
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