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forgotten sounds
Contributed by
rawkergurl2003
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You hold me close,
and say the words
that make me feel alive.
You pull me in tight,
and touch me in spots
that feel so good inside.
Lies are all that are heard,
as sins are formed
in the mist of darkness falls.
What is so wrong, feels so right
as you hold me close
and say the words
that make me feel alive.
Nothing is to come of the silent sounds
that are screamed from your lungs
but yet you pull me in tight
and touch me in spots
that feel so good inside.
Together we've met the devil
that controls our thoughts
but only one can overcome,
as we lay there silently
knowing what's been done.
You ask me not to tell a soul
as if youre ashamed of whats inside.
So the silent sounds are heard no more,
until you feel you must use me once again.
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rawkergurl2003
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2004-06-10 13:57:05]
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Re: forgotten sounds
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:46:33 PM AEST
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I like this one alot, sad and love all mixed together, great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: forgotten sounds
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by WestCPunk on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:35:30 PM AEST
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| I love the way the way you wrote this, because to different people it has many possible meanings! |
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