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Please Stop
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:37:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Please stop your awful punishments,
As I know that it is me who you resent,
You beat me regardless of my frightened pleas,
Punching and kicking until I am on my knees.
Please stop these terrible insults,
I know that everything is my fault,
But your words are too much for me to take,
I am only flesh and blood and can easily break.
Please stop these monstrous beatings,
You have ripped to shreds all my feelings,
I feel worthless and weak,
Scared to move and scared to speak.
Please stop hurting me,
Youre destroying a life, cant you see,
Making me feel like an ugly garden weed,
Laughing and sneering as I lay there and bleed.
Please stop all this pain,
Itd be kinder to place a bullet in my brain,
But no you get off on watching me slowly die,
You feel pleased at your ability to make me cry.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-10 14:37:02]
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Re: Please Stop
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by diamond_tears on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:39:58 PM AEST
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| fab poem!!! |
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Re: Please Stop
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:18:59 PM AEST
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Very nice! Thanks so much for sharing that with us, I enjoyed it.
~Jenna |
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Re: Please Stop
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by willow_tara72002 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:22:29 PM AEST
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| This ones sad,.. and i get what your saying in it. Life really likes to get worser when you think its as worse as it can get,....great poem |
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Re: Please Stop
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by screwup on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:28:30 PM AEST
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| This poem is awesome... I love it so much. It makes so much sense... I mean life does seem to kick us when were down. |
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Re: Please Stop
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:52:47 PM AEST
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| :) i hear an echoe, fantastic x |
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Re: Please Stop
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:42:56 AM AEST
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The words are sad but very true & well put together. You have captured the reality of many peoples unfortunate life & penned it very well indeed. I thank you for sharing.
Corinna |
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Re: Please Stop
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:44:39 PM AEST
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Wow, I don't know where to start the whole entire thing was awesome and very deep!!
I loved it all
~Kris~ |
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