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Savage Wonder
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:32:58 PM in AEST
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Savage wonder brings me to my knees
Glory in the passion that swirls around me
Lightening archs upon the sky that was dark
And savage wonder consumes my every fear
Savage is the breath that uproots the tree
Danger in the beat that soothes and lulls gently
Fury that fights the land and forces to submit
The wild and strong will abandoned in sweet surrender
Wisdom is lost and desire brought to the fore
Expectations gone in the flood of the old
And new is the feeling that draws me near
For close I am drawn to the heart of the storm
Tears that erupt fall down from the sky
Wet to the skin I am heated within
Ice may pelt and the wind may blow
But savage wonder has me enthralled
MW 26.12.2003
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:34:40 PM AEST
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| I really really like this poem. Thank you for sharing it! :) |
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:46:35 PM AEST
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"Wet to the skin I am heated within
Ice may pelt and the wind may blow
But savage wonder has me enthralled"
Awesome!!! Spectacular!!! I love it! Great poem!
It kind of reminds me of "Drops of Reign" or "Standing in the Rain" of mine. I'm such a rain nut. That goes for storms too.
Again, I love it.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by Joker17 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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I agree with the others, very well done, well described poetically. I happen to be a Storm Chaser/Spotter here in wisconsin, USA, and that poem really rings true. I love storms more than most other things, in fact a good storm wipes out bad feelings, and brings alive my soul, and soothes my every thoughts into oblivion.
Thanks for sharing that one, it was wonderful. Now I can't wait for the next storm to find me, or me to find it.
J Samuelson (Joker17) |
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:30:37 PM AEST
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| very strong. I love the rain myself, it hides my tears well..... yet another great poem!!! A++++ |
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:39:40 AM AEST
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I loved this one, your poems are always great, but this one beat all the rest in my opinion anyway, shame I cant vote more than 5 as it was brialliant, :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:05:50 PM AEST
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I love it! I love storms... actually, I love all water, I'm always out there dancing in the rain... And this poem held me enthralled....
Jaime |
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Re: Savage Wonder
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:04:00 AM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous poem, i love storms too and the mists that lay in afterwards:) hugs n' love nessa
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