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Underneath It All
Contributed by
true_poetry_writer
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:35:15 PM in AEST
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Underneath it all I'm just a girl trying to live her life,Underneath it all I realized you don't need a lot of make-up to be pretty
Underneath it all I'm just a girl who is pure,beautiful,sweet and skin deep
I don't need stylish clothes,make-up,jewlery and a prince charming
Underneath it all I'm filled with beauty,laughter,and faith
I am who I am and will never change
what really matters is what's underneath it all
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Re: Underneath It All
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:37:02 PM AEST
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I thought this was a really good poem.... Good write
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Re: Underneath It All
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:37:22 PM AEST
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| I'm really glad there is someone out there that thinks like you....watching society today I wonder about what has happened to everyone...anyway lol, it's awesome you feel this way! |
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Re: Underneath It All
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:38:42 PM AEST
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Amen to that! Nice write.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Underneath It All
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:51:59 PM AEST
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| nice write, strong words, just try to let whats underneath it all show out for everyone to see. A+++ |
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Re: Underneath It All
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:03:11 PM AEST
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Great write....good thoughts...
Jenni |
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Re: Underneath It All
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:32:19 AM AEST
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| What seems meretriciously self-contradicting should be coolly understood ...thats how I enjoyed this poem... |
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