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Within Me Dies
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:25:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Within Me Dies
Darkness spreads
This is life
The flame within
Dims with the sadness
Brightens with happiness
The flame within then flickers
The extinguished flame brings darkness
Can't get the flame of life back
Once it has extinguished
Lost the dimmed brightness
The flame within
The flicker
Is nature
Dying within
The flame
Flame within
Has died
Dimming within
Again
Flame within
Is living
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2004-06-10 20:25:08]
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Re: Within Me Dies
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:32:15 PM AEST
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| great poem! I enjoy the time you seem to have put into it. A+++ |
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Re: Within Me Dies
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:55:33 AM AEST
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Great poem, you have written it well,
pixie xx |
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Re: Within Me Dies
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:29:21 AM AEST
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Flame within
Is living
That is bloody brilliant doll..This one is so rich with feeling and the flow is on top..I can imagine you and I getting together and teaming up in many ways..Between the 2 of us what a world what a world..Never forget how great you are here..Your being here is an asset to this site. |
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