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Why Im sorry
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:06:00 PM in AEST
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Im sorry If I screamed
I never meant to yell
Im sorry if I hurt you
even if you cant tell
Im sorry that I failed you
I tried my very best
Im sorry that you ended up
being just like the rest
Im sorry im not handsome
I dont take your breath away
Im sorry im not smart enough
dont know what things to say
Im sorry that you lied to me
I never thought you would
Im sorry I cant let you go
even tho you say I should
Im sorry that I love you
I wish I never had
Im sorry that my heart aches
It never has this bad
Im sorry for everything I did
even what you never told me
Im sorry that left me here
and youll never get to hold me
Im sorry for alot of things
things you didnt have to do
but Im sorry most of all
for not being good enough for you
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:21:56 PM AEST
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very emotional write. hoping all is well.
the voice
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:33:52 PM AEST
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oh that's very sad.... :(
a very emotional poem
well written as always - but i hope u are not feeling this way atm. |
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:02:11 AM AEST
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you know what I honestly think...you shouldnt be sorry...because one of these days your gonna meet someone that loves you so much...and you will be so perfect for them...you gotts look around and realize that that girl is less than you...you are so much more better you express your feelings and dont play games...Im sorry your life isnt all that great...but you will suceed I know it...in writing or soemthing you love...look forward to life...forget about her...you have so much going for you...you may not know it...but you do...just you shouldnt be sorry...love ya
much love,
Dani
p.s. great write and I loved how much emotion and feeling you put into it...but you need to just not be sorry...you did nothing wrong you were yourself...and some day someone special will accept that... |
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:59:58 AM AEST
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Awww sorry that ytou feel this way, you ARE good enough don't ever forget that... great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:13:01 AM AEST
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| very emotional write. beautiful poem, makes me want to cry. you have a soulmate, someone who loves you for you. even if you do yell sometimes. good job sweetie. |
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:00:22 PM AEST
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Stop for just a minute and think. What if it was not you that was not good enough for this relationship? I can't figure out why we always choose to blame ourselves. It takes 2 to make or break a relationship. That shoe might also fit on the other foot. Just think about it for a bit. Hope things get better.
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:54:03 AM AEST
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Dear holder... I'm sighing again! Geez - you get me all crazy with your writes! Half of me wants to tell you NOT to be sorry for the vast majority of this is nothing to apologize about... and the other half of me knows most every woman probably wants a guy that's brave enough to write something like this. *sigh*
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Re: Why Im sorry
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by swiftsouljah on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:11:12 PM AEST
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ever get that weird feeling when you can totally relate and you can relive past and present pain through somebody eleses words... well thats how i feel right now
great job
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