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Cease to Be
Contributed by
comfortablynumb
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm losing sight of what is real
I cannot think
I cannot feel
I cannot breathe
I cannot see
Would anyone know if I ceased to be?
What if I can't outrun my fears
What if I scream and no one hears
What if I drown in my own tears
Would I really cease to be?
Cause i'm losing touch with reality
Forgetting practicality
I have two personalities
If one ceased to be
Would I still be me?
Maybe I don't want to be me
Maybe I wish I could just be free
I'll disappear into the sea
Or maybe I'll simply cease to be.
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comfortablynumb
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2004-06-10 22:53:33]
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Re: Cease to Be
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:47:18 AM AEST
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| great write, I can relate. excellent choice for rhymes and good rhythm. A++++ |
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Re: Cease to Be
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:06:10 PM AEST
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very well written. The rhyming scheme is excellent.
Kimberly |
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Re: Cease to Be
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:02:11 AM AEST
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| amazing write. =] |
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Re: Cease to Be
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by calebcrain on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:41:39 AM AEST
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| i loved reading this poem it flows very well i especially liked the third stanza, it's an interesting thing to think about. |
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