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silver lover
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:30:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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silver lover
sharpened edge
open wrists
solemn pledge
weary eyes
strangers leering
laughing sighs
anger searing
pressing flesh
slices deep
worthless life
broken heap
failure streak
many tries
broken heart
endless cries
blissful wound
flowing life
endless struggle
relentless strife
open wrists
teary eyes
beating heart
slowly dies
puddle up
red waste
embracing deaths
sweet taste
over now
wasted air
wonder if
you'll care
many thanks
silver lover
caring like
no other
you offer
soft caress
freeing me
from distress
sharpened edge
comforts me
silver lover
sets free
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Re: silver lover
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:12:16 AM AEST
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wow, this made me cry...its so like I dont know very powerful...it hits home for me...I know exactly how that feels...I love it but I hate it...mixed emotions always...I know...that people think Im a freak but like Im not...im not I dotn know...this is one of your best writes...I think its a masterpiece..I loved it...but its so sad to think that I rely on my silver lover....I dont know...mixed emotions...great write....
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo
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Re: silver lover
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by rugby_player on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:08:53 AM AEST
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| Very good job.....It has a deep messege...I liked it a lot. YOu are a very gifted writter. unlike me.....my writting is nothing compared to yours......again great work...peace..rugby_player |
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Re: silver lover
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:08:43 AM AEST
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| beautiful imagery once again. nice job with your style, good wording. i loved it. |
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Re: silver lover
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by waos on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:35:07 PM AEST
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| i like it...how its different than how most people style their poetry. |
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Re: silver lover
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:42:44 PM AEST
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| i'm feeling so much like this right now and i don't even know why... this was absolutely brilliant... i mean reeeeally good |
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Re: silver lover
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:40:34 AM AEST
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holder... I think I read this four times before I dared to comment. I will not cease to be amazed at how you manage to weave so much in, especially in this format. I'm quite sure if I tried - it would be nothing more than a list of disconnected words!
Struck again
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Re: silver lover
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:26:48 AM AEST
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Amazing write yet again. Very well put together. Very enjoyable read. (moving)
Corinna |
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Re: silver lover
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 09:42:27 PM AEST
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| i know this feeling maybe i will be able to slit my wrists tonight and then that person will never have to worry about me again. |
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