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BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:16:05 AM in AEST
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LostLove
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Bold judgement in hopes of love
Ripped apart, fallen from above
Over in the blink of eye
Key to happiness is not to cry
Even when the clouds are stolen and grey
Now is not the time to stray.
Holding your heart out on your shirt
Eventually turns memories to dirt
As time fast forward before you know it
Reap the darkness and never show it
Tremendous weight on your heart.
Always leave life unlived and torn apart
Novelty present of a liars friendship is fake
Dont settle for nothing for your own sake.
Blinding pain makes you weak
Lost in the darkened night only his hand you seek
Its only an emotion dont overreact
Sometimes its better to never look back
Tomorrow loses luster
Even when he loves her
Revenge is a bloody Valentine card
Engaged to the grim reaper is hard
Does it hurt when you think about her?
Honesty makes you unsure
At least for awhile
Nice time to live in denial
Depends when she cries
Stolen are her heart, hand and skies.
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strange_lindsey
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:24:46 AM AEST
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| *wipes tears* well this spoke to me, a lot. x |
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:15:51 AM AEST
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I saw you penning this one. I trust you had a window seat, as it seems to me to be written above your emotion, beyond the need to hurt, looking out over the tops of clouds . . .
Thoroughly emotive and heartfelt write, Lindsey - I appreciate you sharing this with us.
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by little_genna on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:34:19 AM AEST
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*feel cold tingling allover body* wow i loved this out pour of emtions yet it sounding general and everyone reads it as its them in your place, well thats how it felt to me.
love and hugs
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:05:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful and grasping poem, strong words...
Greetz,
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by Kie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:44:05 AM AEST
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Pain and tears penned this poem. It made me feel like someone was reaching inside of me and twisting my heart into endless knots.
You do write very well, your poems flows wonderfully but the added icing is the feeling that you put into this one. It not only humanizes you but it calls to the reader to feel the words and the silences between your stanzas.
Just excellent to read.
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:47:21 AM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by juliette on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:14:04 AM AEST
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I am not feeling so charitable right now - my heart is broken but of a different form, and still couldn't not comment on this one.
There are so many lines I like - too many to quote as a matter of fact and this is rare. I feel your pain, frustration, longing, and love. To combine so many extremes makes this such a readable piece. You have taken a common concept, love or lack thereof, and managed to give it so much of yourself as to make it completely original. Great write! Waiting to read more........
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:14:34 PM AEST
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wow Lindsey very good poem very honest and emotional I loved it. I was trying to pick out a favourite line but I love it all. Hopefully we can talk again soon Lindsey.
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by arden on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:59:35 PM AEST
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so very sad... this just cannot be expressed in words. such great sadness and deep emotion.
beautiful write.
i truely loved this.
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:40:42 AM AEST
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| i think this poems very - good bit of a classic looks and feels very professional |
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Re: BRoKeN HeaRT aND BLiSTeReD HaNDS
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:42:29 AM AEST
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simply beautiful lindsey:) hugs n' love nessa
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