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insanity on the floor
Contributed by
arakrune
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Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Insanity on the floor
Please show goofy the door
Lost souls mill about
As the ignorant run an shout
Look to the east
Beware of the beast
Societies doppelganger
Flees by in a blur
Music jams loud in the background
Another moment lost then found
Light a cig and relax
As you listen to the sax
Spinning lost ones
Looking for that special bone
In the depths
We share breaths
The sun rises bright
Your eyes a saving sight
And the world goes away
As we forget its stage play
STR 10-6-02
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2002-10-15 20:15:00]
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Re: insanity on the floor
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:24:13 AM AEST
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| insanity on the floor you say... my word, that can mean a number of things!! this thing you wrote, it reads like the examination of small town. the whole walk through gives a barrage of images of where you are, but insanity on the floor?!? don't know what yur up to er thinking, but it seems odd in here. er maybe it's just one of those things incorporated into the smalltown everyday living list of events. yea, that sounds somewhat right... i hope so. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: insanity on the floor
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by arakrune on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:35:25 AM AEST
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| its about a moment in time and what is happening all around me at that moment as far a small town goes i live the los angeles orange county basin and i guess a coffee shop can resmble a small town |
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Re: insanity on the floor
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:56:44 AM AEST
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| i think you have taken some thoughts... mixed then up in an insane/sane head and given us this poem that i think is quite good, not to mention entertaining... another great piece of prose... |
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