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Dying Flower
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:23:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When we were together, I was something of a rose
I was happy with the air and the way the wind would blow
But now that it has past and we just didnt seem to last
The sun has now gone in
The brightness faded away
And all that I fed on has not at all wanted to stay
The seeds of which you planted, have withered at the root,
Ever since you angrily stood on them with your foot
Why did you encourage me to grow and water me each day
And then when I began to bloom,
You wished me far away
I'm sorry I just think its a little unfair
That you would wish for a flower
And then as soon as you have her
You drowned her out like a shower
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SweetRhythm
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2004-06-11 10:23:11]
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Re: Dying Flower
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:54:57 AM AEST
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I really did enjoy reading this.... you have painted the story well , great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Dying Flower
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:35:04 AM AEST
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| good symbolism. i love the image of the dying flower. nice write. |
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Re: Dying Flower
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:35:20 AM AEST
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| i find that those without love have more power than those with it. |
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