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God Help Me
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:12:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Voices in my head, bursting my brain
Losing my thoughts, as my mind they drain
Turning me into, their living doll
Following their orders, I hear them call
Whats mankind, what do they owe you
You follow your daily routine, without a clue
Go to your work, from nine til five
Is that living, is it being alive
Youre much better than them, they are scum
Go out and show them, youre number one
Make them pay, for making you this way
We are your power, hear what we say
I try to repel the voices, push them aside
But they keep screaming, from them I cant hide
God help me, if they take total control
Ill end up buried deep, in a cold dark hole
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parkman
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2004-06-11 15:12:56]
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Re: God Help Me
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by Archie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:15:57 PM AEST
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| A great write and a very thoughtful scenario |
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Re: God Help Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:48:44 PM AEST
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Schizophrenic and turbulent.
I do like your dark poetry, parkman - its oftentimes disturbing, and at others delightful.
This was definitely in the disturbing category.
Well done. |
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