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Dirty Phone Call
Contributed by
pixie
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Heavy breathing down the line,
Who is this little perverted swine,
Who gets off on listening to you panic,
His voice and words are completely manic.
You dread the sound of the phone ringing,
And wonder what sort of terror hell be bringing,
His very words can chill your soul,
Makes your heart race and your stomach roll.
He tells you that he knows what youre wearing,
You can feel his eyes all over you. staring,
At night you carefully drawn all your curtains,
So there is no peep show for whoevers lurking.
It makes you wonder how close he really lives,
By the clues and the secret messages he gives,
He says he follows you every day,
That he longs to be close to you in every way.
You slam down the phone and begin to shake,
Willing yourself to stay awake,
As youre too afraid to fall asleep,
You pray to the Lord your soul hell keep.
You hear a noise and grab the phone,
On the other end, you hear his tone,
Whispering that hes very near,
You drop the handset and feel sick with fear.
Before you know it he comes through the door,
Your knees buckle and you fall to the floor,
He looms over you ,so big and so tall,
All this could stem from a dirty phone call.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-11 17:12:33]
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:11:22 PM AEST
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I know that this probably isn't supposed to be funny, but somehow the last line struck me that way...
Another good one, keep them coming...
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by Hanno on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:51:02 PM AEST
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I've ever only received one dirty phone call......
Just laught at them and say dirty things back and they leave. |
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:08:29 PM AEST
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yeah lol I agree with the first 2 I have had 2 dirty phone calls and yeah thats all I did I just laughed and talked dirty back but I mean I talked "dirty" lol and he got weirded out and said hed call me bac later and then he never called me back...Instincts my friend instincts lol go with it...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:07:15 PM AEST
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| interesting. it brought me to that position, well done. |
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:42:42 PM AEST
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WOW THAT WAS LIKE A STORY! IT'S ABOUT A CRUEL SUBJECT BUT YOU WROTE IT SO WELL IN DETAIL!! THIS WAS A REALLY GREAT ONE PIXIE~I LOVED IT!!!
LOL~DAN!!!! |
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:57:20 PM AEST
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HS,your verses were perfectly chosen to ignite the fear in me,so bizarre as to how there really are people out there like this who come off on rising fear in others.I really enojoyed reading this,you have a beautiful talent,keep posting and I will be sure to read more.
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Re: Dirty Phone Call
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by lexxie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:44:22 AM AEST
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this was another great one!
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