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Fake
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:11:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Faces painted, hiding beauty
Voices tainted, executing duty
Soothing lies, displaying perfection
Unspoken cries, distorting direction
Cheerful faade, placating humanity
Concealing odd, mocking insanity
Marching rows, obeying command
Withering rose, vanishing land
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-11 20:11:54]
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Re: Fake
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:21:06 PM AEST
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This poem just made me think. It's so true. Keep up the good work. I believe people hide things from other people bc maybe theyre afraid of being judged, or even being hurt. Something along that line.. lol any who! Keep up the good work, I loved it!
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Re: Fake
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:17:25 PM AEST
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| I have to say...I'm a real fan of your work so far. Keep it up :) |
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Re: Fake
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:28:22 PM AEST
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| Oh! I like this very much! It begun with the obvious thought but exceed expectations as it moved along. Very, very well done! |
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Re: Fake
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:44:10 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. 8 lines brings a lot to my mind. |
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Re: Fake
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:59:18 AM AEST
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I always search for your work, another poem, another great opiece of writing
pixie xx |
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