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Frightened Little Child
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:44:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She was isolated,
On that eventful day.
An innocent game,
Turned into something dark.
Frightened little child,
Scared to tell the truth.
Plagued with the thoughts,
That she was just no use.
Everything was all her fault,
Trapped between those walls.
Thinking what had she done,
To deserve all this painful hurt.
Cursed by the evil.
A nave little girl.
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diamond_tears
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2004-06-12 05:44:48]
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Re: Frightened Little Child
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:50:58 AM AEST
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| What happened to her? |
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Re: Frightened Little Child
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:02:48 AM AEST
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| Piques my interest... yeah, so what happened?? Sounds promising nonetheless. |
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Re: Frightened Little Child
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:07:38 AM AEST
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| I read this as terribly heartwrenching, sad, and extremely personal. If I'm interpreting correctly, my heart goes out to you, diamond. This piece is on the short side - but definate full and powerful nonetheless. Very well done! |
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Re: Frightened Little Child
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:34:08 AM AEST
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Great poem, I cant help but feeling that the little girl you tsalk about is/was you...I hope that I am wrong.
takecare,
pixie xx
I loved it tho...great work |
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