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Blocked Roads.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I cant get,
Rid of this pain.
Im bored of telling my-self,
That it will all be OK.
When I close my eyes,
I see it all again.
I dont know why I still live,
I am burned inside my stain.
They said theyd help,
I bet they wont!
I bet theyll just leave me,
In the deep end to float,
But the thing is I cant,
Because Im being pulled down,
Im drowning inside,
Seeing things around.
I cant live like this,
Because I live inside my head.
Im so scared of living,
But I dont want to end up DEAD!!
I dont know who to trust,
And dont know where to go.
All my good roads are gone,
Or blocked by the snow!
I feel so cold!
But I dont know where to go!!
I feel so alone.
Like a dead animal on the road
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2004-06-12 07:24:00]
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Re: Blocked Roads.
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:31:08 AM AEST
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Sorry for your pain. but you have written about it with such great talent :)
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Blocked Roads.
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:33:58 AM AEST
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I hope you get better soon, your poem is good and reminds me of a song by one of my favorite singers who just passed away recently: Ray Charles wrote a song called "Lonely Avenue". The first verse goes like this:
"Oh my room has got two windows
but the sun shall never come through
cause I'm awfly down and dreary
since I broke up baby with you...
...I could cry, I could cry, I could cry
I could die, I could die, I could die
cause I live on lonely avenue
lonely avenue" |
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