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I'll hold back for love
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I look in the mirror...
I hate what I see
I have all the to die for looks
but I hide behind my writing and books
I know you want to dig deep in my soul
and figure out what it is I hold
my heart is slowly shying away
I still look forward to my dying day
I tried to tell you I'd be me if youd stay
but still you turn around to me and say
you dont understand me
I dont get you
this isnt the way I want to live my life
holding back everything and living in strife
you tell me I complain
when really I only care
but killing myself
I wouldnt dare
if it makes you happy
I'll hold back
I'll say killing myself pfft...
I couldnt hack
so please just turn around and say
I fell in love with you this very day
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:19:15 PM AEST
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I hope things work out:
Better to be alone than in a relationship of one sided love |
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:46:23 PM AEST
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hey,
this is very good,i liked it.however,remember,don't give up.there's always a way out and don't worry.i'm always here 4 u dude.love ya.
Love always,
Andrea |
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by saveMEfromMYSELF on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:47:33 PM AEST
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I consider it a good thing when other's can compaire material to their live's or the live's of thoes they know. In other words, ecxelent!
I have a friend going through something like this. Her ex dumped her and she still loves him, and was willing to take her life to prove it too him. She's been trying with little avail to get back together with him. but he's not a very good guy for her and she deserves better. I don't know this man you speak of, but the way I see it there's only one person doing the loving,there's no point to the relationship. Not everyone can grow into love. This means you deserve better than this, and can probably get better than him too. {ower to you. |
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:56:22 PM AEST
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| I know its tough when you dont get back what you put in.... this is an expressive piece that hits home with me. (as usual) great job powerful words. A++++ |
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by arden on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:57:01 PM AEST
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whoa, this is some deep meaningful writing.
i like this one alot. kinda sad but still amazing.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:02:25 PM AEST
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Another great one.. And i mean it. Its emotion packed.....I'd give it 2 thumbs up (6 if i had that many) anyways great job keep up the good work
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by waos on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:25:10 PM AEST
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| i love it, i totally get what you're saying...i feel that with this guy too...good write, very good |
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Re: I'll hold back for love
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by CarrieLynn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:56:03 PM AEST
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Hi dani thanks for commenting my poem... i read lots of your poems but i really liked this one i can relate to it also... your a wonderfull poet.. very emotional... thanks again...
carrie |
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