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Can You Hear Me
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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can you hear me, lord
when i cry
sometimes, i feel like
i could die
my cross is heavy
my path dark
the wounds i carry
leave their mark
can you hear me, lord
when i cry
i am not hard yet
by and by
i wonder if you
hear me lord
sometimes i do
cry to you
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Re: Can You Hear Me
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:56:49 PM AEST
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| That was really sad. It really touched me. I think that was amazing. |
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Re: Can You Hear Me
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:58:22 PM AEST
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| Very well done! Excellent job! Keep them coming. Remember he dont give you more then you can bear! |
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Re: Can You Hear Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:35:01 PM AEST
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Faith, I do know that feeling. You need him so badly but the answers don't seem to be coming. The comfort and peace needed isn't there for you. I myself have been questioning him a lot lately. I need questions, now, in my time, not his. Humans, and our need for immediate gratification, sad. But I do know he is there, just sometimes I can't feel him.
Rita |
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