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Don't Give Up
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:28:52 PM in AEST
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We all have good and bad days,
But you are all special in so many ways,
To end your life wont stop the hurt and pain,
As the people wed leave behind would face the strain.
We should hold our heads up high,
Not long to be amongst the deceased in the sky,
Every day we wake up and greet the sun,
Is another battle we have fought and won.
Life is hard and we seek the easy way out,
But it is so normal to scream and shout,
So write down your inner feelings,
Then youll make some sense of their meanings.
Dont give up you have come so far,
You should be proud of who you are,
I have read your brilliant work,
Felt your heartache and your hurt.
I know these paths you speak of and tread
I feel all the things you do inside your head,
So you are not alone in this big, scary place,
We are all a part of the same human race.
We all have inner strength hidden inside.
And we all at sometime want to run and hide,
But I am with you every step you take,
Our future is the one thing we must make.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:34:04 PM AEST
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touching... Im sure many are gonna relate. life can be a struggle.-We all have good and bad days,
But you are all special in so many ways,- I really liked these lines. we all have our own gift. A++++ |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:34:53 PM AEST
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beautifully written, great message to all:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by SugimotoYouki on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:36:36 PM AEST
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this helped me a lot to read...
great work, dear...
keep going... |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:41:25 PM AEST
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yeah I was warned about this write...I love it!!!! I can feel how much you really care about the people on this site...or even just near you...you can really understand the pain the people on this site can feel I knwo but it was a great write...I loved it and enjoyed reading it...
5/5
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by Luinil on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:42:29 PM AEST
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| very encouraging and beautifully written.. great job! |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by Kie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:11:17 PM AEST
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This is one of those poems that the earth's population could benefit from at some time or another. If I could I would post it on every door.
Very inspirational, uplifting, positive and a great ode to live by.
What more could a person ask for then to have a friend who would take steps with them? I can think of nothing.
A remarkable poem that will likely stay with me for a long, long time.
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by bluedragonfly on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:02:01 AM AEST
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| This is so true. very well writen and so sincere. u must be a very caring person. have a nice day : ) |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:24:45 AM AEST
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| This is a kick a** poem. Very well written. Very well said. Peace out. God bless you. |
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by willow_tara72002 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:18:48 PM AEST
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This was an amazing poem, and it was very encouraging to me,.and made me think of things iv never concidered before, when it comes to killing yourself,. so thx for some more veiwpoints, this poem was very helpfull. thx for writing it. Luv ya
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Re: Don't Give Up
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by lexxie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:10:08 PM AEST
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another beautiful powerful poem
l3xxi3 |
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