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Feudal
Contributed by
Luinil
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:02:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Born into servitude
Longing to lead
Wearily following orders
Chafing away others filth
Enduring every beating
For the sins of the privileged
Bowing your head
Swallowing your vengeance
Taking no credit
For the service provided
A life without rest, forgotten
Bow down before your masters
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Luinil
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2004-06-12 21:02:28]
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Re: Feudal
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:22:18 PM AEST
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| excellent. true. nice flow. =] |
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Re: Feudal
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by buchi on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:31:43 AM AEST
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| distinct elements that resonate with one another and release meaning ...very well written |
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