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Jumping off the bridge
Contributed by
creed
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:45:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm sorry if I hurt you
I'm sorry if I made you angry
I'm sorry I hit you
I'm sorry I yelled
I'm sorry I made you feel bad
I'm sorry I'm not pretty, though you say I am
I'm sorry I'm not always happy
I'm sorry that I'm depressing
I'm sorry I made you cry
I'm sorry I made you unhappy
I'm sorry you're not here
Most of all, I'm sorry I didnt do
anything to stop you
Copyright ©
creed
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2004-06-12 22:45:51]
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Re: Jumping off the bridge
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:50:09 PM AEST
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You said this well. Very well.
I would have liked to have heard someone say those words in days past, but alas - they did not.
An uncannily good read. Made me think and look twice - all I ask for in a poem. Well done. |
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