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Candy Coated Poison
Contributed by
blackmarker
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:46:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Candy coated poison
Your love was nothing but a bitter pill
Wrapped up in the sugary promise of things to come
Funny how I never saw through your lies
Like a nave child taking candy from a stranger
Strangers always had the best candy, didnt they?
Your candy coated poison was so addictive
I never realized I was hooked
I drank and drank you in
Took too much
Im drunk on your poison
Bitter yet pure
Sour yet sweet
Your love was nothing but a bitter pill
Wrapped up in the sugary promise of things to come
Candy coated
A gauzy wrapping, too thick to swallow
I gag
Slowly asphyxiated
Everything is turning black
Im dying, smothered by your lies
Your lies that I tried so desperately to swallow
Your love, nothing but a bitter pill
You killed me
I died
Drunk and sick
Asphyxiated by the candy coated poison
Of the one I always loved
And the one I thought loved me.
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2004-06-12 23:46:31]
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Re: Candy Coated Poison
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:50:03 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem, I didnt really mind the repetition because the astounding word choice and concept made up for it.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Candy Coated Poison
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:01:11 AM AEST
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wow, amazing poem
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