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Life is a Sham
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:12:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my mind swirls in and out visions block my thoughts i wait for the feeling that wonderful feeling a faint fingertouch my sanity bursts spewing filth over my chilled form consincous washes over me i am alone not just me we are alone alone to face the world you try with a smile i don't lie you see a fake smile no one is true we all tell a lie a shadow of doubt no sun shines through the price of youth has burnt to the ground you fall to your knees you beg only for life they pump you with drugs
life is a sham a dust ruffle set that you hide in your closet on special occiasions it crumbles, it ashes kiss me you fool for i am a witch i'll eat you for breakfast maybe even lunch sleep comes to us it never fails unlike love which breaks and shatters sarcasm is witty it scatches the face of a thousand faced man he keeps to himself his pain is so real
seconds tick down to an endless eternity screams pierce the perfume thick air again my head spins the world's standing still the sane control us we rebel still i love but still am unloved love is a curse a horrible dream a thought of a husband with children attached darkness covers me i float downstream
i cry for relief the pain of a god rain washes clean the month of our sorry rainbow expressions why do you cry, if there is a god? why do you go, if there is a will? if i were to touch you, would you shrink away? a burning sensation replaces my once full heart blacken with time time brings pain a tangle is my mind it's so hard to explain
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Re: Life is a Sham
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:10:18 AM AEST (User
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My first dose of angsty poetry for the day and I have to say it's steadily making me feel that delicious pessimistic feeling again. I feel very disillusioned by life too. |
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Re: Life is a Sham
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:03:51 AM AEST (User
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wow, that was great for a first poem,you have come along way in your writing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Life is a Sham
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:24:16 PM AEST (User
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very impressive write. descriptive wording and powerful statements, for being one of your first this is a strong write. if i were to touch you,
would you shrink away?- I like these lines. Ive felt like this. A++++ |
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Re: Life is a Sham
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:19:10 AM AEST (User
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well....my writings look pathetic,lol. excellent write. =]] |
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