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Giant and the Swallow
Contributed by
crow
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:45:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What had he thought,
the tiny Swallow.
She perches on hands
of the giant that could
crush her.
Seems to weep for the mate
that has fall`in.
What is love,
as he sees the Swallow cry,
what had he thought
of the soulless Swallow.
She rests on his palm,
both tamed.
the giant, and small creature.
Her voice, his sadness,
to witness a Swallow`s
soul passing.............Crow [Today a small swallow
died in my hands, it
amazed me the courage
of his mate, as she sat
on my hand. How she must
have loved him...
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2004-06-13 02:45:28]
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Re: Giant and the Swallow
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:50:29 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was a very beautiful piece, thanks for sharing it with us. What I liked most about this is how you didn' t overstate things but still you brought out a lot of emotion in it, especially in the last verse which is my fave. Congrats. |
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Re: Giant and the Swallow
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:09:07 AM AEST
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strong write...oh how nature shows us so much
Shari |
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Re: Giant and the Swallow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:27:05 AM AEST
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Yes, total love and devotion can help you overcome a lot of fear. I agree with you. She must have loved him very much. This is a beautiful write and a beautiful experience you shared with us. Thank you.
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Re: Giant and the Swallow
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:10:52 PM AEST
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oh this is touching shows love voercomes anything
good to see you my friend
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