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Blood Stained Memories
Contributed by
steven_fenton1982
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:40:43 AM in AEST
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It's todays tears,
that will feed tomorrows dreams.
Yeah, it's yesterdays pain,
that makes us stronger once again.
It's morning sunshine,
that reminds us of the flames.
Yeah, those same flames,
that leave our dreams in dust.
You were the blood in my veins,
but when you pulled out my heart,
like a river you flowed out of me,
and left me stained in my lifes water.
When you give your heart, the only way you get it back is in pieces.
When you fall in love you have everything to lose.
You shattered my soul and left it's jagged edges to cut my insides.
All i'm left with now are blood stained memories.
Copyright ©
steven_fenton1982
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2004-06-13 08:40:43]
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Re: Blood Stained Memories
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:58:16 AM AEST
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good title!
so sorry of here of your loss and pain. i hpe you heal. |
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Re: Blood Stained Memories
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:21:07 AM AEST
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| Ouch, definitely don't wanna be where you are right now. That's how good the poem was - full of emotion and I admire your writing style. Well done. |
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Re: Blood Stained Memories
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:56:44 AM AEST
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this was great really emotional you put a lot in to this it is really great
lina |
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Re: Blood Stained Memories
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:33:49 AM AEST
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| i relate to this poem so well.. you did an great job on it as well. i really like it.. AMI JO |
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Re: Blood Stained Memories
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:43:48 AM AEST
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very emotional and raw, sorry for your pain,
pixie xx |
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Re: Blood Stained Memories
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by LiquidChaos on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:40:25 AM AEST
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this is awesome.
When you give your heart, the only way you get it back is in pieces.
so true. and so tragic. but a broken heart can be mended! so don't give up hope.
this was a great write!
::clicks furiously to read more of steven's stuff!::
keep it up!
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