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blood stain cloth
Contributed by
aprillie
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A blood stained cloth and a sharp knife
Is all i need to get thru this strife
Let the blood drip down my skin
It makes me feel complete within
A blood stained cloth and a sharp knife
Are what get me thru this life
The blood keeps on flowing
Look at my face im glowing
The cloths is gone and knife put away
But not for long will they stay
The blood has dried
The feelings did subside
Not for long will i be fine
Soon i will make another bloody line
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2004-06-13 15:07:09]
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Re: blood stain cloth
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by jillian_f006 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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| Holy crap. That is amazing, I feel the same way. Not even kidding. I wrote a poem like that but didn't post it. Wow. I didnt really know i wasn';t the only one. MSN me. jillian_f@hotmail.com |
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Re: blood stain cloth
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by betty on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:03:19 PM AEST
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Your poem made me sad. Good job, that's the point right? Have others feel your emotion. Great poem.
"Beware of infection", says the medical student.
If you ever need someone to type to, pm me.
Read my poems! please.
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