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If You Only Knew
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
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If you only knew
How much I miss you, each moment youre away
If I could somehow let you know, then maybe you would stay
If you only knew
How much I love you, how my love will never change
If you could find a way to believe, maybe youd end this pain
If you only knew
How much I need you, forever here by my side
If you could look deep in my heart, see the love I have inside
If you only knew
How I look in your eyes, I can see our future bright
If you would share that vision with me, perhaps youd be here tonight
If you only knew
How certain I am, youre my true love its no illusion
Maybe you would give us the chance, stop your hearts confusion
If you only knew
How I know youre the one, I want you for my wife
If you had faith at all in me, together we could start a new life
If you only knew
How Ive tried to show you, in all I say and do
You still wont believe, you have your doubts, but if you only knew
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 04:21:41 PM AEST
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| I'm sure she knows. Sometimes it's hard for people to accept what has been there all along. Your love for her is so pure and so very amazing that she would be a fool not to know. I hope she comes around. |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 07:10:07 AM AEST
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Have you ever showed her any of your poetry?
I can't imagine why you are still single with such a heart! Theres a girl out there that would love to have poetry written for her,you will find her & maybe already have! Very good write! |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 07:23:51 AM AEST
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Actually, she's read all of it. Every stanze, every line, every word... none of it helps her to believe in me though. It's kind of ironic, I read the comments left on my work and people tell me what a great heart I have and how my love for her is so true, but the only person I need to see that... can't. Anyway, thanks for the comment.
Curtis
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by Lia on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:46:38 PM AEST
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| ~sigh~ indeed. Curtis, take it from someone who knows...she does know, she knows and understands it all. And chances are, she feels the same. Unfortunately there is still something in her life at the moment that she is not ready to part with. What that is, you will probably never know. She is a fool not to see that she is killing you and torturing you everday. If she doesn't want to be with you, then admit it and let you free, but if she does, she needs to run to you as fast as she can and never look back. Curtis I have been in her shoes. It's a tough spot, so I know in some of my comments you could come right out and call me a hippocrit. But see, I almost lost my 'you'. And it took him walking away for me to see it. I ran just as fast as I could to him, literally. I was the fool, but I got it straight. Had to have a nudge though... |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 03:08:28 AM AEST
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Thanks for your comments Lia, I always appreciate them. At times I do think she feels the same. There are times when we're together when I feel so close to her and it really feels like we're together, but that feeling leaves as soon as she does. I desperatly need that feeling to be real. I know somethings holding her back. Maybe it's that she doesn't believe this is who I'll always be to her. Maybe it's the comfort of the life she's known for the past four years. Since you seem to enjoy the cliches so much, here's one for ya: "If it seems to good to be true, it probably isn't." Maybe that's what she thinks, I don't know. All I can do is try to show her that even though it may seem too good to be true... it is, and just hope she can find some faith in me.
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