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tainted love
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tainted love is on my mind,
For thats what the future beholds,
No love of any kind,
A warm heart turned cold,
I thought that I meant something,
But somewhere that vision was misplaced,
Suddenly I meant nothing,
My passion gone to waste,
There are little who would allow this,
Or little whod even know,
For now I take poisons kiss,
And stoop to the very low,
Your very own blood stained floors
Are for fools to see,
Foolish men who came so close,
To even loving me.
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2004-06-13 23:11:56]
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Re: tainted love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:20:11 PM AEST
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this is breathtakingly beautiful, big hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: tainted love
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:27:56 PM AEST
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wow, beautifully, emotional...I loved this...it doesnt liek come out ...I dont know Im speechless great write...I call it a MATERPIECE!!!!!...
read and comment my stuff if you want...I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: tainted love
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:28:46 PM AEST
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This is very sad but dont give up, love is still somewhere out there and I hope you find it.
In truth, I've felt this way before, the exact emotions and thoughts lingered on my mind as well. This write hit close to home.
Great write, the pain, frustration and sadness depicted so well. Well done.
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Re: tainted love
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:32:20 PM AEST
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wow, beautifully, emotional I loved it...great write..Im speechless I say its a MASTERPIECE!!!!!
read and comment my stuff if you want I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: tainted love
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:08:57 AM AEST
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very powerful, great poem
pixie xx |
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