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Guardian Angel
Contributed by
Seans_Girl
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:16:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Cries of help coming from that room
Thinking someone better come soon
What's happening to that poor girl that's always sad
Has all her hopes and dreams just gone bad
Quietly listening to the pounding on the door
Trying to get rid of her agony and not to hurt anymore
I can see her now; tears are rolling down her face
Somehow I know what it's like in her place
I can match the same tone in her voice
Hoping she will make the right choice
As she opens her bedside drawer and brings out a gun
I come to her side and tell her "things will get better hun"
"I was once in your place and killed myself at fourteen"
"I only saw in the world the cruel and the really mean"
"I promise you things will get better than this"
"Look at life and all the things you would miss"
The upset girl then looked down at the gun held in her hand
Her tearful eyes then looked at me like she did understand
The sad girl put her gun back into the drawer
As I floated up to Heaven, the place where I soar
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2004-06-14 01:16:24]
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:33:50 AM AEST
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| I think many will relate with you on this one. I like your use of the angel very nicely done. good write! A++++ |
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:33:15 AM AEST
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yeah, i like the way you used the angel in this poem, great job,
pixie xx |
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