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No White Flag!
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pete
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:10:39 AM in AEST
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NO WHITE FLAG(Peter Sprenkeler)
Terrorisms great desire is to drive us to our knees,
Indeed to a degree this evil may hold the upper hand.
There will be no white flagalthough we are fearful and shaken,
Of our resolveterrorism just does not understand.
Yet terrorism is just another tool of the spiritual enemy,
So much of the world he has totally deceived.
Yet there will be no white flagdespite his deception,
It is so extensiveit is hard to be believed.
And yet to this enemywe will glare defiantly,
We will not relentin courage we will stand.
There will be no white flagno bent knees of submission,
Against evilto fight our souls demand.
In arrogance evil will strutthinking the victory at hand,
Yet it does not realize the war has only just begun.
There will be no white flagdespite deeds dark and unholy,
We will resist in righteousnessin the shining sun.
We may be bruised and bloodiedyet far from beaten,
We realize that awesome foes against us vie.
There will be no white flagthough battles we lose,
We will not roll over weakly and die.
There will be no rest for evilno lack of courage from us,
There will be defianceas long as blood does course.
There will be no white flagthe Deceiver will be beaten,
Righteousness and honourinevitably a victorious force.
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Re: No White Flag!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:18:41 AM AEST
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wow!
This poem is absolutely magnificent.
It's so powerful and riveting,
not to mention that it's got so much meaning behind it!
Very very strong and powerful,
you're portrayed your message very clearly here,
this poem won't slip out of my mind in a hurry...
Brilliant work!
Keep it up!
13 year old girl deeply impressed,
_.:'~Katie~':._ |
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Re: No White Flag!
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by wray on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:41:24 AM AEST
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| I think the message is a bit too simplistic - you've written this from the very black-and-white POV of Bush & co. without taking a deeper look into the terrorism side. They have their reasons. But in any case, to each his own. |
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Re: No White Flag!
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by Overstated on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:43:05 AM AEST
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| i think this was written in a unique style although i disagree with some of your themes. I think you've conveyed your ideas excellently. |
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