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Missing You
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:26:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm missing you so much
I almost hugged you last night
I grabbed onto my pillow
and held it oh so tight
and while there I was dreaming
of seeing you and a greet
and I almost imagined the pillow
was throbbing to your heartbeat
I looked again at your picture
and almost saw you wink
and then I realised, there you go
that's what you get when you think
I dreamed of seeing you last night
where finally we were free
but I woke up from that sweet dream
and wished you'd come back to me
Copyright ©
kailadragon
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2004-06-14 11:26:49]
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Re: Missing You
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:35:09 AM AEST
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awwww this is lovely, I know just how you feel when you are apart :)
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Missing You
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:54:51 AM AEST
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now that is heartfelt poetry.
GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!
Brian |
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Re: Missing You
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by freespirit on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:03:26 PM AEST
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| very nice I like this one keep them comming |
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Re: Missing You
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by fallensilence on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:20:47 PM AEST
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| i think everyone else has already said what i would like to have said. this was an amazing poem. you have true talent. -david |
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Re: Missing You
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by Solmyr1404 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:57:09 AM AEST
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good write....is this about who i think it's about?....if it is, i'm sure he feels the same way....good write, and please check out my two new ones....
Solmyr Malikando Amerikayou |
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