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Death in the Swamp
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:46:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Little bugs crawling all over the place
little bugs crawling all over my face
I followed him out when I knew I shouldn't
I ran through the swamp when I knew I couldn't
This is my doom, this watery grave
there's no one now, none who can save
I trusted him, and now I'm dead
I could've been safe and stayed in my bed
now the tourists are doomed to hear
forever, my maniac laugh of fear
i'll never lay rest, peace never comes
never, while there are still heart beating drums
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2004-06-14 11:46:30]
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Re: Death in the Swamp
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST
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wow, i love these kinds of poems
great work
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Re: Death in the Swamp
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:51:37 AM AEST
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i hope this was just a bad dream,
hahahaha,
but if it wasn't i hope you're ok.
I adore your poem though.
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Re: Death in the Swamp
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:38:50 PM AEST
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wow this got me uhhhhhhh a great write for sure
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