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Chaos
Contributed by
Fluffhead
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:53:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am the slient stalker.
I am the silent watcher.
I am the chaos.
I am the light.
I am the night.
I am the ground beneath your feet.
In one swift moment,
I could take it all away.
Copyright ©
Fluffhead
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2004-06-14 16:53:21]
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Re: Chaos
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by waos on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:07:19 PM AEST
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| not bad |
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Re: Chaos
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:15:26 PM AEST
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| good first attempt! well done hun!! try and open up a bit more, the best poetry flows out of ya hart, or at least thats wot i think. but im jus me.. meh. byebye xxx |
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Re: Chaos
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 06:08:09 PM AEST
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hello
well,good poem.very strong and powerful,keep it up.take care.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: Chaos
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by NoahsARK on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:18:48 PM AEST
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Not one of your better ones. But it is nice.
Anita |
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