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Contributed by
Bright_White_Dove
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I find myself stareing at the stars
Searching for comfort
Wanting answers
I find myself crying out for you
A name without meaning
No response
I find myself fading away
Into the darkness
Lost forever
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Bright_White_Dove
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2004-06-14 19:08:48]
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Re: Empty
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by babyboobooangel on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:10:56 PM AEST
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love this poem alot of feeling went into it
your so great
love you forever and longer
your Angel Terrence |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:42:22 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is lovely. I can relate totally. This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem. |
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Re: Empty
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by slackoffsamiam on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:03:56 PM AEST
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| I love it when a poet isn't scared to write a short poem, because if it had been a line more it wouldnt have been as perfect as it is now. |
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Re: Empty
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:32:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful and simple. I like it short.
I hope things are looking better for you.
Take care.
Andrew |
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