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Fatality Of A House
Contributed by
chuck
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:38:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I crept through the house,
passing from room to room.
Its not even fit for a mouse,
this recently lived in tomb.
A house lost from uncaring,
was once someones dream.
A musty reek to my sickening,
whispers a cry for self-esteem.
A treasured home of pride,
malformed and desecrated.
Sullied throughout the inside,
scarred from a human horrid.
Light oozed in from a window,
stirring shadows of cracked slate.
I can sense a chilling sorrow,
as decay hastens its optional fate.
Power once electrified its spirit,
now disconnected to lay dormant.
Such a lonely heartrending sonnet,
restored only by an enchantment.
Chuck Keyes
July 7, 2002
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chuck
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2002-07-11 06:38:42]
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Re: Fatality Of A House
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:31:02 AM AEST
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| This is wonderful Chuck...exactly what it was like when my papa and momo found an abandoned two story farm house..It was in such disarray I didn't think they would ever get it fixed back to its previous state..but they did and it's just as beautiful I'm sure as when it was built..=) keep up the good work. |
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