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Tears
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears fall from my eyes,
Like raindrops fall from the skies,
Caressing my cheeks as they trickle so,
Tickling my face as they freely flow.
Down my face my tears travel,
As this pain in my mind I try to unravel,
Feelings of being all alone,
Without any place to call my home.
The droplets of sadness reach my lips,
Melting into them, they softly kiss,
Disappearing without leaving a trace,
But this feeling inside I can not erase.
My eyes are a window to my soul,
And so from here my pain unfolds,
Unfold in the form of bitter tears,
That leave me vulnerable and expose my fears.
Not many things can make me cry,
Im always left with the question why?
Why do my tears have to fall,
Why does crying leave me feeling so small.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-15 11:03:18]
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Re: Tears
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by RhythmBndt on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:08:25 AM AEST
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| Crying is a good release at times :) Great write. |
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:11:23 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed it pix, yeah I liked it a lot! I loved the way you captured the feelings of crying & how the poem un-folded. Very nice.
Corinna |
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Re: Tears
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by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:15:29 AM AEST
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I really liked,
My eyes are a window to my soul.
How true! Very beautiful poem. Crying is a crazy, refreshing, sad thing! Nicely depicted.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Tears
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:16:17 AM AEST
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| another wonderful write. crystal clear imagery. almost made me want to cry, but see i cry at everything. great job pixie. 5 stars |
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Re: Tears
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by diamond_tears on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:41:10 AM AEST
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| wonderful.. i love poems about tears! xxx |
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Re: Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:07:31 PM AEST
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beautifully sad...... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Tears
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST
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| beautiful wording... great job! |
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Re: Tears
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by slackoffsamiam on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:18:49 PM AEST
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| you capture feelings so well im almost envious, maybe one day ill get some pointers from you. |
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Re: Tears
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:44:57 PM AEST
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This is why I love poems about tears and the like.
Its so magical yet sad at the same time.
Great write here, pixie. Loved it. |
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Re: Tears
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by lexxie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:44:28 AM AEST
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| this is so beautiful no words can describ......very powerful right agian nice rythem |
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Re: Tears
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:20:49 PM AEST
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Your words go out touching those who read.
Showing us your vulnerable true self. Your sound is so sad. I hope you feel better. Great poem. |
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