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Prisoners Of The Earth Revolt
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Illusion is the master
confusion reigns
nobody cares or hears
when you fall
there is only maddening laughter,
I pretend not to listen
do my time
stay in line
though i do not recall
what really matters.
Dreaming of a feeling
of a tender touch
and a warmth of love
hmm
a sweet surrender,
the sceaming of a inmate
shatter the moment
i bang my head on the wall
because i have forgotten
what i was trying to remember.
I try to hide away
only to be held
captive
by my cells four walls
that let me know
i will never be the master,
so i will continue
to play the game
though i don't know
what it is called
and it doesn't matter.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-06-15 14:20:32]
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Re: Prisoners Of The Earth Revolt
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:25:44 PM AEST
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beautfiully written, so full of longing............ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Prisoners Of The Earth Revolt
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:45:36 PM AEST
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| a beautiful poem, well done. |
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Re: Prisoners Of The Earth Revolt
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:57:10 PM AEST
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A bit sad but written well.
U can come out of hiding , now.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Prisoners Of The Earth Revolt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:50:09 AM AEST
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I found the way you shattered the moment.
It went from warmth to frozen within a nanosecond.
I like it. The title drew me in, as it was very noticeable.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Prisoners Of The Earth Revolt
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by Val-Hundra on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 09:45:36 AM AEST
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Very wonderful piece. I like it a lot.
"Illusion is the master" this is very true, but illusion can always be manipulated. I find that when confined by four cruel walls, illusions of my own making are sometimes the only way to cushion myself from "bang[ing] my head on the wall" too hard.
Hang in there. All walls must fall... eventually. |
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