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The Life Behind My Wristband
Contributed by
waos
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's my inside on the outside,
put there by the sharpest point.
It's my self destructive side
bent on release, fulfillment.
It's a heat I can't control,
fueled by the fires of hell
rampaging and pillaging me.
It's a heat that sets my blood afire,
sets my blood to boil.
It's my pulse that beats deep within.
I can feel it pounding beneath it all.
It's the flow that leaves my hand tingling,
my wrist burning, my skin raped,
my soul torn.
It's the desperation to find something,
but I'm not quite sure what.
It's my game with fate,
testing and teasing;
hoping not to be the victor.
And all of it combined,
is just my life behind the wristband.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-06-15 17:27:31]
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Re: The Life Behind My Wristband
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:30:37 PM AEST
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Interesting concept.... your secret life....
I like it, good poem, hope to see more soon...
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Re: The Life Behind My Wristband
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by slackoffsamiam on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:00:28 PM AEST
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| pretty deep man, dig it |
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Re: The Life Behind My Wristband
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:35:52 PM AEST
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I know what u mean my friend. I liked this poem although I've seen better by you this was still really good and I LOVED these 2 lines.
It's the desperation to find something,
but I'm not quite sure what.
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Re: The Life Behind My Wristband
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:33:44 PM AEST
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| I like it. Sparks the imagination, making you think! |
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Re: The Life Behind My Wristband
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by WereCat on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:32:44 PM AEST
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Deep, dark and soulful. It's beautiful. I know how it feels to be looking for something you want so bad it makes your heart ache and yet not even know what your looking for.
-Cat |
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Re: The Life Behind My Wristband
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:09:56 AM AEST
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I like poems with emotion and something that someone feels. this was deep and meaningful. I loved this one as well!
~Kris~ |
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