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Fears
Contributed by
Fluffhead
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:54:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You are the only one who would call me beautiful.
Your the only one who cared.
You would always stay just to show your there.
You would hold me tight to chase away my fright.
But now your there and now I'm here.
Right up there with all my fears.
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Fluffhead
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2004-06-15 18:54:24]
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Re: Fears
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by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:53:21 PM AEST
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| Well this is a nice poem and you expressed yourself so beautifully. good job. |
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Re: Fears
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by thewordzwithin on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:48:36 PM AEST
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| Very clear and full of the uncertainty needed for a poem entitled, "Fears". Great job. I just have one thing. I don't know if this was just a typo or you meant to but in the third line, I think you should have put, "you're" instead of "your". Other than that, I love the poem. Great job and I'll be reading more!!!!!!!!!! |
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