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When I'm Gone
Contributed by
Angela
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:59:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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this one's good-cause it's for you.
it'll probably come out all wrong,
but thats ok, cause i want it to.
i know why you do those stupid things you do,
they drove me crazy,
but you knew i'd do anything for you.
you're such a pain,
but life without you wouldn't be the same.
so come on,
call me call me.
god, i swear you'd think i hated you.
come over come over,
your such a little pain,
and why the hell did you want me again?
get out of my life, get out of my head,
i dont need your ***** anymore.
HAHA and you thought you could get me in bed.
well you never stood a chance,
i'll be dead before that happens again.
speaking of chances,
you're quickly running out,
you've reached the line,
and i dont ever want you to be mine.
finally it's my time to say,
forget you.
you can laugh it up all you'd like,
about how you made me look like a fool,
but my crying days are over,
i hope you wish you could start over.
cause you would come to me,
and it'd be something like i said-
"yeah right"
i'm happy now,
come back to me some other night,
yeah-maybe when i'm dead.
Copyright ©
Angela
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2004-06-15 18:59:48]
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Re: When I'm Gone
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:22:02 PM AEST
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OUCH! IF HE REALLY DESERVED THAT I GUESS HE DOESN'T REALLY DESERVE YOU NOW DOES HE?! HE'S GOTTA REMEMBER A COUPLE OF THINGS,1. THE BEST THINGS AREN'T IN BED 2. SEX IS SOMETHING LIKE 80% MENTAL & 20% PHYSICAL!!! A LOVE TAKES ALOT MORE TO MAKE BURN THAN JUST A 5th!!!! NICE ONE ANGELA!!!!!
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Re: When I'm Gone
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:52:21 AM AEST
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very powerful and raw poem, great job
pixie xx |
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