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A world in my head
Contributed by
WereCat
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:21:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Come into my world my dears
Where we are free to shed our fears
We can laugh & run & even fly
With many flavored water falls & multicolored sky
Where all the ground feels like a fluffy mattress
& bad things can never find our address
Where time seems to slow when were having fun
& no one is tired when the day is done
The party really starts with the going of the light
The most wondrous creatures come out in the electric blue night
Will laugh & sing & dance around
& talk with the new strange friends weve found
Everyone has a place inside
So that from reality they can hide
Where fantastic melodies ring through our ears
& jokes from purple trees will make us laugh to tears
Thank you for joining me through mine
maybe will go to your place next time
Copyright ©
WereCat
... [
2004-06-15 21:21:47]
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Re: A world in my head
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:33:18 PM AEST
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| YAY! I love this poem. It's a great happy write. |
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Re: A world in my head
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:57:27 PM AEST
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great images and such a pleasantly happy poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A world in my head
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:12:50 AM AEST
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wow great poem,
keep em coming
pixie xx |
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Re: A world in my head
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:28:39 PM AEST
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What if I want to get lost in there????
Great poem!! I quite enjoyed it, left me with a smile on my face...
Jaime |
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Re: A world in my head
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by Dreama on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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yes! very good! I love your world! amazing how words convey great imagery! keep it up!
Pete x |
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