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old poet most brazen
Contributed by
aernby
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:56:10 AM in AEST
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down The Old Come Along Trail
along the branch most taken
writing slow and steady
comes an old poet most brazen
writing light and free whistling
as he comes lost in reverie
moving right along engaged
in mischief and ancient hymnody.
wordy vagabond, lying truth speaker
storyteller, mythmaker walking along
The Old Come Along Trail whistling
as he goes merrily berrily along.
on he comes bright eyes focused
somewhere, somewhere out there,
moving along whistling an old song
road weary voyager without a care.
he comes on a quest on a journey
seeking what there is to find.
soldier of the revolution and defender
of the faith, bartering for life in kind.
crotchety old pain merrily whistling
as he comes. searching for a song
an image, a line, a word he goes
merrily berrily among the throng.
writing slow and steady
comes an old poet most brazen
down The Old Come Along Trail
along the branch most taken
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Re: old poet most brazen
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:35:29 AM AEST
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Seems I am also a most brazen old poet Oh..oho..Oooh..welldone.ha,ha, thankies..
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Re: old poet most brazen
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:01:40 AM AEST
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Loved this, aernby.....good to see you again..
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Re: old poet most brazen
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:01:41 AM AEST
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Loved this, aernby.....good to see you again..
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Re: old poet most brazen
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:41:06 AM AEST
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Paints a picture of old times, kinda. Nice flow and imagery. I can almost hear him whistling along...........Thanks for the smile.
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Re: old poet most brazen
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:06:36 AM AEST
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oh john, this is excellent and soo beautifully written! im so happy your posting again:) hugs n' love nessa
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