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I hate
Contributed by
lanz
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:42:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate the way you treat me
And everything you made me become
Youre a slut and I hate you
And youre not my mum
I hate the way you look at me
And the way you act all innocent
Around others you pretend nothing is wrong
But in reality you couldnt be a worse parent
I hate how my birth was an inconvenience
And how I made your life a bore
I hate how you dont love me
And how Im always just a chore
I hate that Ill never be good enough
And I hate that Ill never make you proud
I hate how everything I do is wrong
And how you voice your dislike out loud
Im half of you and that half I hate
My heart has been broken beyond any repair
I hate thinking I might turn out like you
Youve ruined my life, and I know you dont care
Youre a slut and I hate you
But I wish I could forgive you
Copyright ©
lanz
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2004-06-16 06:42:44]
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Re: I hate
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:00:25 AM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful poem, hope things can get better for you, takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I hate
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:07:30 AM AEST
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it is good some times to have a good vent. i hope this poem has mad you feel better.
core!!!! you have grea talent.
i like your stlye of writing
keep it up! |
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Re: I hate
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by iluvpencils on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:16:45 PM AEST
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| Wow. that's really powerful...you do have a great talent. Keep writing! This is awesome...powerful but awesome. |
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