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Does He Even Care?
Contributed by
kimi
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:02:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why did he have to leave me here
All alone
Nowhere to go
Why, when he knows of my deep-rooted fear
Of being on my own
So much so
That when I get really down
If there's no-body there
My heart starts to frown
I begin to get scared
I've done it once before
I know I'll do it once again
He, not knowing half the score
Isn't anxious of my sin
Isn't even aware…
Does he even care?
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2004-06-16 10:02:49]
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Re: Does He Even Care?
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:44:23 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reaading this one, it shows deep emotion and admits imperfections scarring and harsh aswell congrats |
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Re: Does He Even Care?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:48:06 AM AEST
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there is only him who can answer that question for you , thank you for saring your poem, it was a good read,
pixie xx |
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