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Contributed by
bebe20071
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:04:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought love was my lucky thing, I thought if many love me, any one could too, but I was wrong, I wanted the one I love to love me back, Now I know what it feels like to be in his place, he tried to run away from me, like I did to the ones that loved me, so there is no reason to cry or say why, maybe if I try harder next I could be lucky
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by WinterFox on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:48:10 AM AEST
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| You've expressed your feelings very well. One of those cases of "what goes around, comes around"...love is a mutual thing...Mike |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:05:38 PM AEST
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First of all, a poem writer is called "a poet" and with a little formatting you may be on the right track. Poetry is a form of expression, which you've done here, now you can format it to "look" pretty, and it takes form of a poem. Keep writing,keep expressing! It's what all fine poets are made of.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:17:27 PM AEST
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| I like This. I Can Say You Express Your Feels Good |
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