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UN-
Contributed by
mechemu
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:04:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Unrealistic to a heart thats battered blue
the thought of recieving a love which is new
letting in someone who is not you
Untouchable to everyone but a few
a certain person will only do
to wear this guard down or to
be emotionally moved
Unbearable was the pain of "realization"
and the though to let go and run
Now Unbreakable is this heart of mine.
Copyright ©
mechemu
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2004-06-16 13:04:55]
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Re: UN-
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by fairy-of-ice on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:10:09 PM AEST
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| good write, this poem really made me think. i especially love the line ''letting in someone who is not you'' i can relate and think its a scary thought! well done! |
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Re: UN-
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:14:32 PM AEST
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great poem, very thought provoking
pixie xx |
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Re: UN-
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by buchi on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:52:22 PM AEST
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| Very interesting piece...loved it |
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